This complicates critiquing should have put both images in one post. anyway this image is subtle and friendly looking four guys get in a car together could show he's friends with himself and trusts himself. there appear to be no errors in this image from what I can see and fits well enough with criteria.
1. Both of your images meet the criteria for this assignment -- 2 finished images with at least 4 selves.
2. I think this image might show the importance of your car to you. Maybe it represents freedom. It looks like you're all getting in the car, so maybe you play both the role of driver and rider on the road of life? I don't know! I keep trying to put metaphors into these images! It may just be that your car is a big part of your life because you use it every day! And your other image, I think this shows possibly a favorite pastime of yours? Or maybe you're just playing a game with yourself, against yourself.
3. I don't see any problems with either of these images. Good attention to detail with the reflections on the hood of the car!
4. I think the pool image might be most successful. The space is more open and we are able to see more of you. It's also a really down to earth scene. This could be any group of friends just hanging out, shooting some pool together. The change of clothes also adds to the scene.
You met the requirements for this assignment, without any technical issues in either of the images. While I enjoy that you changed it up and actually took your photo outside, I feel like the angle of the tripod would have given you more space if you raised it higher. I also enjoy how you did such a simple concept, as hanging out with your friends and going somewhere. Nice job Mark
1. Both images meet the criteria for the project and appear to have been planned and constructed to fit. 2. Car ride is a fun way of representing a road trip with yourself, shows different sides of the artist and his expressions. Playing pool is a cool way of expressing that you always have your own back and don’t always need others company to be entertained. 3. Neither look to have any technical issues. 4. I think the playing pool one was the more successful of the two, it was well constructed and planned.
1. Both images meet the criteria of the assignment. 2. Car Ride and Playing Pool sum up both of the images fairly well. 3. There weren't any technical issues I could see. 4. I think Car Ride is the most successful, I enjoy the different motions each of the duplicates have.
This complicates critiquing should have put both images in one post. anyway this image is subtle and friendly looking four guys get in a car together could show he's friends with himself and trusts himself. there appear to be no errors in this image from what I can see and fits well enough with criteria.
ReplyDelete1. Both of your images meet the criteria for this assignment -- 2 finished images with at least 4 selves.
ReplyDelete2. I think this image might show the importance of your car to you. Maybe it represents freedom. It looks like you're all getting in the car, so maybe you play both the role of driver and rider on the road of life? I don't know! I keep trying to put metaphors into these images! It may just be that your car is a big part of your life because you use it every day!
And your other image, I think this shows possibly a favorite pastime of yours? Or maybe you're just playing a game with yourself, against yourself.
3. I don't see any problems with either of these images. Good attention to detail with the reflections on the hood of the car!
4. I think the pool image might be most successful. The space is more open and we are able to see more of you. It's also a really down to earth scene. This could be any group of friends just hanging out, shooting some pool together. The change of clothes also adds to the scene.
You met the requirements for this assignment, without any technical issues in either of the images. While I enjoy that you changed it up and actually took your photo outside, I feel like the angle of the tripod would have given you more space if you raised it higher. I also enjoy how you did such a simple concept, as hanging out with your friends and going somewhere. Nice job Mark
ReplyDelete1. Both images meet the criteria for the project and appear to have been planned and constructed to fit.
ReplyDelete2. Car ride is a fun way of representing a road trip with yourself, shows different sides of the artist and his expressions. Playing pool is a cool way of expressing that you always have your own back and don’t always need others company to be entertained.
3. Neither look to have any technical issues.
4. I think the playing pool one was the more successful of the two, it was well constructed and planned.
1. Both images meet the criteria of the assignment.
ReplyDelete2. Car Ride and Playing Pool sum up both of the images fairly well.
3. There weren't any technical issues I could see.
4. I think Car Ride is the most successful, I enjoy the different motions each of the duplicates have.